“This just confirms what I initially suspected, ie that you didn’t read past the first third. I said this almost verbatim.”

No, you did NOT. I read the whole thing and you scattered arguments about willy-nilly, with no clear structure. Yes, you meandered around the general area, but you simply could not express your point clearly.

“I don’t need your tips on writing or argumentation.”

Which is why you’ll never learn to write or argue well. I’ve published five books, and I took the criticisms of my editors very seriously, which is how I became a better writer.

Enjoy the last word.

Master of Science, Physics, 1975. Computer Game Designer. Interactive Storytelling. www.erasmatazz.com

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